Friday, November 14, 2008

Mother Bear and her cubes











Mother Bear and Her Cubs One day cubs were getting hungry so mother bear went out to find some food. She took her baby cubs with her. Mother bear (Sky) went another direction then baby cubs (Brandon, Sheyleen) went the opposite direction. Then Brandon and Sheyleen were getting really hungry and they found food right beside a cave. They went towards it and found fish. They grabbed it and stared eating. They heard something coming closer to them. A Grizzly Bear came out and stared ROURING. The baby cubs ran as fast as they could. They were crying and Sky can her them. Sky was crying she had all this food for the cubs. It was getting dark and the cubs were getting tired they found a tree they laid down and fell asleep. Sky was still up crying and thinking ‘what is happening to my babies’? She got up and stared looking for them. She was walking then she saw something moving. She was calling their names, ‘Brandon, Sheyleen’ no one answered she got closer. It was the Grizzle Bear mother ran and cried at the same time. She saw a tree she sat down. She was breathing hard. She laid down and there her babies were sleeping right beside the tree. She was so happy, she laid down with them then said ‘I love you.’ The End By: Siera McNab Editors Caleb, Jaxon F, Sara G

2 comments:

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austinsstories said...

i liked the story but you had some mistakes and i think you should go on and fix them but other then that i liked it.